20211023雅思大作文范文分析-工作着装

Some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress,because what matters is the quality of their work.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

翻译：有些人认为雇主不应该在意员工的着装，因为重要的是他们的工作质量。你在多大程度上同意或不同意？

话题：社会类

类型：同意与否

题目分析

在工作岗位中着装这个事儿，真的是仁者见仁智者见智的，每个行业每一家公司的都要有自己的企业文化和行业特点

It is true that the dressing style vary according to the industry to reflect the culture and work ethics of the workplace.

在如Google，或者一些广告公司，以及一些创意性导向的公司，员工的着装可以相对随意

Since the atmosphere within certain business communities,for e.g.an ad agency tends to be informal,the attire of the employees reflects this outlook.

在这些公司中，如果员工穿着都过于统一标准化，很可能会限制员工的创造力，和工作效率

having a strict dress code may actually affect the employees'quality at work

workers are not given total freedom to demonstrate their personal styles

本着结果第1的标准，很多雇主为了让员工更舒适的工作，效率和产出更高，都会不在意着装问题

而在一些其他行业，比如医院，银行等等，员工们通常有着装的要求，来展现职业性

On the other hand,protocol of corporate dressing in sectors such as hospitality,IT,banking etc,is more conservative as it reflects directly on employee professionalism.

有着装要求的公司，员工们统一的着装风格，展现了公司的企业文化，企业形象，公司的道德标准

The attire of an employee of a particular industry speaks volume about the company's work ethic,image and culture.

It adds an impression of professionalism,intelligence and commitment that enhances the overall credibility of the company.

范文分析

In the modern workplace,dress codes are changing as employers focus more on results than on the rules that employees must follow（与员工必须遵守的规则相比，雇主更关注于工作成果）.While I agree that the way people dress should be seen as irrelevant in many work contexts,I believe that dress codes still exist for good reason in certain professions.

开头段：背景引入+观点给出；作者的观点为：在一些行业当中dress codes还是必要的，在其他的一些行业中，可以不存在，也就是非绝 对的否定掉一方或者另一方

Irrelevant：not important to or connected with a situation无关紧要的；不相关的

On the one hand,many employers have stopped telling their staff how to dress（现象）,and I see this as a positive trend（个人看法）.（观点句）Some of the most successful companies in the world,including technology giants like Google and Facebook,are famous for the relaxed office environments that they try to create.Employees are encouraged to dress casually,and even the company executives and leaders are rarely seen wearing anything other than T-shirts and jeans.（举例）However,while managers and programmers are free to dress how they like,they are expected to produce work of outstanding quality.It is clear from the performance and global dominance of such companies that strict dress codes are completely unnecessary in the technology sector.（分析）

主体1段：随意着装，本段谷歌和脸书的例子非常不错，大家可以单独记下来作为语料，蓝色斜体下划线部分，是作者在回应题目中另一个关键词quality of work，是整篇文章紧扣题目

However,I would also argue that rules regarding employees'clothing are still relevant in other work situations.（观点句）We expect certain professionals,such as nurses,police officers and airline pilots,to wear uniforms.These uniforms may have a practical or safety function,but perhaps more importantly they identify the person’s position or role in society.Similarly,a lawyer,politician or school principal may choose to wear formal clothing in order to portray an image of authority,trustworthiness and diligence.（举例）I believe that most of us prefer to see these professionals in smart,formal attire,even if it is not strictly necessary.（总结）

In conclusion,I support the trend towards relaxed dress codes for workers,but I do not see it as applicable to all occupations or sectors of the economy.

结尾段：总结重申个人观点

必学好词：

1.applicable to somebody/something

适用于，适用的

Eg:Much of the form was not applicable(=did not apply)to me.

This advice is particularly applicable to graduate students.

2.Sector of economy

社会类/经济发展常用词，社会经济的不同构成

Sector定义：a part of an area of activity,especially of a country’s economy

部门，尤其可指国民经济中的某个部门

比如：the service/banking/manufacturing/financial sector

服务行业/银行业/制造业/金融业等

国家中的其他行业也可以用sector，比如教育行业education sector

在雅思写作中，我们经常会写到如：

the chronic underfunding of the education sector

发展中国家长期缺乏教育资金

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