大学里面应该如何学习英语?对于非英语专业的同学来 说也许是一个很大的困扰。在大学一部分学会了荒废,一部分人学会了执着。但是不管你是要荒废还是要执着,每个人都必须看一眼头上的达摩克利斯之剑——大学 四六级考试。虽然现在很多大学对于四六级已经没有了硬性要求,但是学习的最终目的还是为了就业,当就业单位还在拿着这把宝剑的时候,每个人就还只能转过身 去,去找解决四六级考试的方法。
不知何时,“模板”这个词进入到了我们的眼帘。太中 国风!太分数至上了!而一个的模板,考友们会想:不用担心老师会给我们的。这个时候太多的人实在是太相信众多教育机构老师的精力了,别说每一个人做一 个新模板,哪怕是每一个班级做一个新的模板都是不可能的,原因很简单:没那个时间!
那么我们就只有求助于网络了,但是网络的传播性实在 是太广了!一个模板刚刚出现,有可能明天就有100个人在用了,你想想当考官看到100个人写出来的作文都用同样的开头的时候,他将会是什么情景。当然这 里指的是国外的考官。国内的考官看到的时候可是很爽的,太棒了!又造出来一帮一模一样的学生,加分点明确,可以给分了!
当面对重重阻力的时候,很多人不禁产生了怀疑。我们是否应该使用模板?使用模板是否会导致低分?我们到底该用什么模板?其实答案很简单,模板应该用,必须用,大胆用!
但是有一个十分重要的前提性条件,那就是模板一定是 要原创的!原创的?!开玩笑,我们这辈子从来就没自己思考过,一直都是老师喂到我们嘴里的!是的,这就是你一直咒骂中国式教育的起点。其实很多满分作文都 是使用了模板,但是由于使用的十分之精巧,同时再加上是原创模板,因此连考官也拿他没有办法,人家写的就是棒吗!
OK,先来看两段例子!靠前段是不好的例子,第二段是好的例子。
Nowadays, thanks to the development of Internet, we are exposed to a vast ocean of information. Some argue that so much information brings a great benefit to our life and study. But for me, the experience with surfing Internet leads me to believe that accessing much information cause more problems than it solves.
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Perhaps no issue in this world is as significance to students as education. Despite various responses people may have on the topic concerning the issue regarding which thing should the education aim at. I, given the chance, prefer to endorse that preparing for careers should have primary consideration.
作为阅文无数的无老师,当看到靠前篇文章的时候,已 经没有了当初得的兴奋,因为这样的文章实在是太常见了!首先Nowadays这个单词是被无数老师推崇的“较高”单词-_-!!!无老师一直无法理解,为 什么有的单词会更较高。然后thanks to节宾语,天呐!多么明显的模板!当我往下看的时候,我只能无意识的检查是否有语法错误,没有语法错误的话,我也就只能给个一般的分数就好了。
但是当无老师看到第二篇文章的时候,初看觉得此文写 得不错。用词准确地道,而且完全是自己完成没有模板,但是当我回头再一回味这篇文章的时候,惊讶的发现,这篇文章竟然也是由模板所出!首先Perhaps no issue in this world is as significance to students as education。看似平淡无奇,但是实际上Perhaps no issue in this world is as significance to就是一个模板,更厉害的是下一句!Despite various responses people may have on the topic concerning the issue regarding which thing should the education aim at.这么长的一句话,竟然只有结尾3个单词不是模板!然后再接下来,下一句的“given the chance, ”其实对于整句话来说根本就没有任何实际上语义的改变!但适当加进来之后,我们会感觉到非常的地道!之所以无老师感觉如此震惊,原因非常简单,就是因为在 这篇文章身上完全看不出半点模板的影子,为什么看不出模板的影子呢?就是因为这篇文章的模板是完全原创的,哪怕不是原创的,也是仅在小范围内流传的!而且 这篇文章后面类似的妙手不计其数!
反过来再看国内流传甚广的403模板,虽然也是胜在模板分量够重,但是由于使用的人实在是太多,实际上已经变成了一颗毒丸。除了让考官恶心致死,爬起来之后给我们一个低分之外,别无其他的效果。当然这里很多人很想看看403模板的阵容。
小郭,放403模板!In a modern society, people always face the dilemma to choose whether AAA or BBB. This problem is the much debated one in that it affects everybody in their daily lives. People may prefer one to another although some may have no opinions about it at all. Before rendering my opinion, I think it is necessary to take a glance at the arguments of both sides.
It is quite easy for average people to choose BBB because of the obvious reason that—. It can be given by a well known example that
But at the mean time, although BBB has some advantages, it also has many drawbacks such as —. Therefore we have no complete evidence to suggest that BBB is always better than AAA. What is more, the innate quality of AAA, unfortunately, is often underestimated; in other words,if you notice the invisible benefits of choosing AAA, you can understand AAA more deeply
Here I would explain a few of the most important reasons. The main reason is that —. To illustrate this, there is an appropriate example that is very persuasive: -
— is only part of the important aspects, and another equally significant role of choosing AAA lies in the development of —.
This demonstrates the undeniable fact that —.
Besides, the further reason why I advocate AAA is that —. This may explain why —.
In addition, some experts maintain that —-. This significant point, however, is often not noticed by most people and accordingly, is unconsciously overlooked
Finally, as a proverb says, “Everything has two sides”. Although I admit that there are a couple of advantages of —-, I still think that the disadvantages of it are more obvious. Such as —, —-, and —-. This demonstrates that we have no complete evidence to suggest that BBB is always better than AAA
If all the factors above are considered, we will find out that the advantages of AAA outweigh those of BBB. Therefore from what we have discussed, we may safely come to the conclusion that choosing AAA is a rather wise decision. But I have not denied the opinion that choosing BBB. I must admit that people can do well without AAA, but no one can ignore the added convenience and satisfaction offered by AAA. Such experience will definitely be helpful in one’s later life。
像这种开头以In a modern society, people always face the dilemma to choose whether AAA or BBB.来作为开始的模板,实在是太多太普遍了。当然还包括“Nowadays, some people hold the opinion that”“In modern society,”当一看到这样的标题,考官就好像用自己的左手握着自己的右手,丝毫感觉不到有任何的激情产生。但是同样是模板,其实如果我们另辟蹊径, 换用一种完全不同的手法来写,感觉就是十分的清新。Before rendering my stand, I think it is essential to take a glance at the argument on both sides. 就是这样,虽然同样也是在展示自己的观点,但是由于完全不同于以前我们看到的十分程式化的模板。其实模板很多时候看的不是用多少词,以及句型有多么的夸 张,其实很多时候凭借前一个词与我们以前看到的文章的匹配程度,就已经有很强的感觉了。